Savvy by Ingrid Law
My rating: 4 of 5 stars
A great conceit, great characters within a great structure and a good story bogged down by a writing style that borders on the preciously overwritten. From the opening paragraph;
"I had liked living down south on the edge of land, next to the pushing-pulling waves. I had liked it with a mighty kind of liking, so moving had been hard - hard like the pavement the first time I fell off my pink two-wheeler and my palms burned like fire from all of the hurt just under the skin."
Thankfully, I either got used to it or Law calmed down the metaphoricsimile a tad and though I rolled my eyes a couple of times at the language, it usually didn't get in the way of the story.
And sometimes it created deep insight;
"'I'm not perfect, Mibs. Nobody's perfect. I just have a knack for getting things right. Maybe that looks a lot like perfect sometimes. Besides you'd be surprised at how many people dislike spending time with someone who constantly gets things right. It's not always an easy way to be.'"
"Maybe we all have other people's voices running higgledy-piggledy through our heads all the time. I thought about how often my poppa and momma were there inside my head with me, telling me right from wrong. Or how the voices of Ashley Bing and Emma Flint sometimes got stuck under my skin, taunting me and making me feel low, even when they weren't around. I began to realize how hard it was to separate out all the voices to hear the single, strong one that came just from me."
"When something like that comes along, whether it's an accident or a savvy or a very first kiss, life takes a turn and you can't step back. All you can do is keep moving forward and remember what you've learned."
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